Rewrite these sentences using correct inverted commas, accurate punctuation and improve ‘said’ with synonyms. Can you add adverbs for how they said it?
Quick Run said the young girl
The young girl turned to her friend and said What was that noise Why is everyone running
Let’s look for shelter said her best friend We’ll be safe over there
Today you are going to become story writers! Based on your plan from Friday, you need to write a short story about someone who is about to face a natural disaster like the boy in A Day in Pompeii from last week. You can handwrite it or write it on the computer.
When you have finished remember to edit your writing to make sure:
You could read your story to a member of your family and get them to give you feedback on how the story made them feel. What did they like? What would they improve?